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Crimson Cahil

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PostSubject: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:48 pm

Crimson escaped the Walmart under her brother's nose. She decided to go to the Hotel. Her father had it demolished and rebuild after the apocalypse because of all the shadow inhabitants and dead bodies. Not to mention the smell. Her bat was gripped in her hand. She couldn't imagine what possible horrors awaited her inside the dark building. Considering the shadows had just arrived. She walked on the steps and to the door, opening it slowly.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:52 pm

Abel had followed her. He gripped the breaking sword tight, scared senseless as the door opened.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:52 pm

Before Crimson opened the door any wider she turned around, to see Abel. "What are you doing here!" she let out along with a yelp.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:56 pm

"I wanted to explore too." Abel said, a little embarrassed.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:58 pm

Crimson blushed from the yelp. "O-oh... Well you should sneak up behind a lady! It's re- ra- rude!" She turned quickly back to the door, making her bright red dress twirl.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:58 pm

"S-sorry!" Abel said, peering into the darkness.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:01 pm

Crimson opened the door all the way. She could see the yellow eyes of normal shadows. It made her spine itch with excitement to be so close to them. She gripped her bat even tighter, her knuckles had gone whiter than her fine pale skin. She took one step inside, immediately swallowed by the darkness.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:02 pm

Abel was reminded of Baby. He hoped the shadow wouldn't find him. He followed her inside, looking around fearfully.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:07 pm

The door slammed shut behind them. Crimson glanced back but remembered she couldn't see. She turned on a lantern she had found in the camping supplies at the Walmart.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:09 pm

The light revealed the dead bodies and blood. Abel froze, staring straight ahead with wide eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:11 pm

The bodies were piled. Meaning the shadows had moved them either into the hotel or from the rooms they had once occupied. Crimson's free hand caught Abel's. She squeezed tightly.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:13 pm

Abel was thankful that he wasn't alone. He took her hand gratefully and started deeper down the dark halls.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:18 pm

The light illuminated the dark red halls, Crimson had a belief that the shadows had repainted. Her stomach churned at the thought. Crimson saw a round shadow on the wall. She turned to see a severed head of a woman, which was still dripping blood from her neck, hung on a door frame. She, with a force of habit, screamed loudly.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:20 pm

The shadows stared at the two with bloodlust. They bared their long fangs, ready for the kill. Abel whimpered quietly as the shadows silently charged at them.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:21 pm

Crimson acted fast, her bat swung out in front of her and pointed just as one of the shadows lunged for her, impaling its own neck on her bat's nail.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:22 pm

Abel followed her lead, stabbing into a shadow's head as it leaped up. It slowly crumbled to dust as it struggled on the end of it in pain. The sword wobbled dangerously, making Abel question if it was going to last long.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:23 pm

"What happened to your daddy?" Crimson asked suddenly when she looked at his sword.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:27 pm

"When this started he threw Baby at me and said that he was going to a castle to fix this." Abel replied. "He's going to be back soon. He promised."
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:29 pm

"And your mommy?" Crimson looked at him with her deep royal blue eyes. Just like her mother's.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:34 pm

Abel was silent for awhile. "Daddy never talked about her." he answered.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:36 pm

"How come?" Crimson pried. Feeling nosy, she then said, "You don't have to answer that...." She looked down again.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:37 pm

"I don't know why." Abel replied.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:41 pm

Crimson only nodded. She continued to walk, she remembered her hand holding his. She dropped it. "I-I'm sorry! Mommy said it's i-in-impolite to touch people without pre-permission."
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:49 pm

"It's okay, Crimson." Abel said with a small laugh.
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PostSubject: Re: Visit To CreepsVille   Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:52 pm

Crimson blushed deeply. "Okay.." She kept her hand at her side though. She couldn't forget anything her mommy had taught her. It'd be like losing her mommy all over again.

As they descended down the hallway, shadows were in rooms with still live people. The two kids could hear their screams but they were past helping. Their blood and organs covered the wall and floor. As they walked the screams from each room were cut short and soon the hall was in silence.
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